This is a very popular essay which tends to get posted around the web quite often.
Yet it suffers from many not-so-obvious flaws, as analyzed in the popular linguistics blog "Language Log." The commentary is written in a calmly analytical style (interspersed with some judicious jibes) that I think many YC.HN readers will find rather agreeable ("a beautifully written language crime, though it pretends to lay down the law") ---
Despite outward appearances, Orwell is not making one of those prescriptivist rants that you sometimes see from people who don't know how language evolves. What Orwell is talking about is deeper. His essay more about style rather than grammar, which means it's not really taking part in the (de- vs pre-)scriptivist debates in the first place. However, it goes the extra mile in using examples to show how pointlessly fluffy prose is simply worse at communication, because it either obscures the point, or (he implies) causes a point never to exist in the first place because it promotes wooly thinking.
Yeah, his essay makes some rookie mistakes, like complaining about recent decline and using the passive voice. He's still correct, in general. He's not stating rules of grammar or trying to lay down any sort of law, he's posting a couple of helpful pointers for getting your point across, which emphasis precision and clarity over appearing educated.
I think the biggest indication that that critique is ill-founded is that it doesn't start with "well, it's kinda long," because that's the biggest hypocrisy I detect. What is really comes down to, is that an essay that's really about prose and composition shouldn't be analyzed as if it's about linguistics, even when it happens to have "language" in the title by stroke of ill fortune.
There was an interesting, non-fawning (and less sputtering than the LL post) piece on Orwell and some of his work by Julian Barnes in the NY Review of Books earlier this year.
I don't agree with this linguist. All he does is torture the meaning of the rules and torture logic in order to squeeze out some kind of inconsistency from Orwell's essay.
I'm not sure whether this essay gets posted because of its advice on the use of language or merely for the following, continuously relevant, observation:
A man may take to drink because he feels himself to be a failure, and then fail all the more completely because he drinks. It is rather the same thing that is happening to the English language. It becomes ugly and inaccurate because our thoughts are foolish, but the slovenliness of our language makes it easier for us to have foolish thoughts.
The implication is that when you use language in the way we often see politicians, the PR department, etc. do, then they are not only guilty of using inaccurate language: they are probably also guilty of having inaccurate thoughts. You should worry about using inaccurate language, because it may mean you are having inaccurate thoughts; a vicious circle.
I must say, calling Orwell’s essay a “language crime” is more than a bit overblown. This blog post’s “jibes” miss the essay’s spirit, and Orwell’s playful (often ironic) tone, and thereby misread its substance, I think. The Language Log author completely ignores the terrible examples that Orwell calls out, and the entire premise of the article, in his rush to nitpick Orwell’s prose and “prove” him a hypocrite. I’ll quote Orwell’s essay here, because this is the essential bit:
> Each of these passages has faults of its own, but, quite apart
> from avoidable ugliness, two qualities are common to all of them.
> The first is staleness of imagery; the other is lack of precision.
> The writer either has a meaning and cannot express it, or he
> inadvertently says something else, or he is almost indifferent as
> to whether his words mean anything or not. This mixture of vagueness
> and sheer incompetence is the most marked characteristic of modern
> English prose, and especially of any kind of political writing. As
> soon as certain topics are raised, the concrete melts into the
> abstract and no one seems able to think of turns of speech that are
> not hackneyed: prose consists less and less of words chosen for the
> sake of their meaning, and more and more of phrases tacked together
> like the sections of a prefabricated henhouse.
Orwell quite skillfully analyzes several of the most common problems with political prose, describes how they operate, and their pernicious effect. His rules are not designed to be rock solid prescriptions, but something more like guidelines or heuristics. The goal, with political speech and writing, as with most expository prose, should be to make imagery concrete, and language precise, because the goal should be to make the author’s plain meaning understood, rather than obscuring it in a vague and meaningless haze.
The blog author’s “logical” analysis of his final rule is the most particularly stupid. Orwell’s plain meaning is clear: “do not take these rules as dogma, and break them where necessary to write clear and stylish prose.” Instead, the author tries to apply an odd mathematical rigor to show that the caveat is somehow vacuous. But consider: if that final rule was removed, would the essay actually be saying the same thing? No. Is this final warning actually self-contradictory? Not really. It’s Orwell’s apparently too subtle way of contradicting the seeming strictness of the previous rules, pointing out that the device was meant for rhetorical effect rather than to demonstrate firm conviction. (Think about it, if Orwell had said “sometimes passive sentences are less clear than active ones,” the reader could equally call him out for indecisiveness.)
In conclusion: meh, a pretty weak language-lawyer analysis, especially for its premise that Orwell is being too language lawyerly. Orwell’s prose where he “breaks” his rules remains clear, concise, and stylish – obviously said rules can be broken without yielding awful language. So what? Using said “rules” to examine prose makes a decent start at identifying some of its problematic passages. An author consciously considering all of those “rules” while writing may decide to break some of them sometimes, but will also (at least in my personal experience) catch sloppy phrases and sloppy reasoning, and write tighter, clearer prose.
I can never keep up with Language Log, and 3 grafs into this I have to say that this post is fantastic, and absolutely justifies the re-re-re-re-post of this essay on HN. Thank you!
This is brilliant. I am pretty sure I read it before, but I do not mind rereading it.
It would be interesting to think about present political discourse and try to find the words that were created solely to avoid saying the truth.
One thing that surprised me is that some of the words he criticised as unnecessary foreign words, seemed completely and utterly English to me. For example, I did not know these words were foreign: "expedite, ameliorate, predict, extraneous, deracinated, clandestine." I guess Orwell really lost that battle.
He likely means "foreign" in a more classical sense: Orwell tends to favor Anglo-Saxon derived words over Norman French-derived words. "Freedom" rather than "liberty", for instance. This is a reaction to the centuries-old stigma against Anglo-Saxon derived words as being crude or inelegant.
I'm a big fan of this essay. I wrote a blog post about how After the Deadline (a proofreading software service) relates to the rules George Orwell talks about.
That's an interesting question. But unfortunately for Orwell, programming is geared greatly towards reuse. So software "cliches" are valued, if they are effective.
Yet it suffers from many not-so-obvious flaws, as analyzed in the popular linguistics blog "Language Log." The commentary is written in a calmly analytical style (interspersed with some judicious jibes) that I think many YC.HN readers will find rather agreeable ("a beautifully written language crime, though it pretends to lay down the law") ---
http://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?p=992
The entire 'Prescriptivist Poppycock' category at Language Log is generally good reading: http://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?cat=5