I think it's a great start, but I think with a little more work you can do better.
The biggest thing is that the page is a wall of text, especially early on. I'm not sure what part is important, what I can skim, and what I only need to know if I'm really digging into it.
Give the reader some clues by using differences in font sizes, containers, etc. For example, take your first two paragraphs, distill them to one elevator pitch, and give it the .lead class to make it stand out.
Developer/Ops/Recent Past/Future sort of run together. Give them a little more visual separation.
On Projects, the image starts higher than the headline for that project. Since you're in bootstrap, consider using a panel with a heading, or something like that to help visually separate the projects and put the thumbnails in a place where they seem more related to the text next to them.
Overall, it's a very clean portfolio site, and I think you're very close to having something that really stands out. It makes me think of redoing mine, using some of the great product pages out there as inspiration.
Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate you taking the time out of your day to help me.
My thought was that this page would supplement my resume and that the person would like the "information overload". I should have spent more time making the pieces the reader is looking for obvious and will put some serious work into the typography to help do that.
I also want to put some love into the screenshots and maybe make it a gallery.
The biggest thing is that the page is a wall of text, especially early on. I'm not sure what part is important, what I can skim, and what I only need to know if I'm really digging into it.
Give the reader some clues by using differences in font sizes, containers, etc. For example, take your first two paragraphs, distill them to one elevator pitch, and give it the .lead class to make it stand out.
Developer/Ops/Recent Past/Future sort of run together. Give them a little more visual separation.
On Projects, the image starts higher than the headline for that project. Since you're in bootstrap, consider using a panel with a heading, or something like that to help visually separate the projects and put the thumbnails in a place where they seem more related to the text next to them.
Overall, it's a very clean portfolio site, and I think you're very close to having something that really stands out. It makes me think of redoing mine, using some of the great product pages out there as inspiration.
Great work!