On: Zuckerberg apologizes for Beacon -- announces a full opt-out

I don't mean he should rely on a focus group or let someone else write for him, I mean finding one or two people that will help him make sure he's saying what he wants to say. There's a lot of room to improve clarity and readability without becoming 'sanitized.'

Sure. I'm not saying that sloppy writing is a necessary condition for candor. But it's a near-sufficient one.