Pretend I'm impatient - oh wait, I am impatient and I don't want to read all that text as I have better things to do. You just lost a conversion.. uh oh!
For real, you didn't captivate me and I am captivated by a random butterfly's. (not really, but I think you get what I mean). That's something to work on. On top of being impatient, I am also cheap and I won't pay for this. Something else to reevaluate.
Overall, good concept but it still needs some ironing.
For real, you didn't captivate me and I am captivated by a random butterfly's. (not really, but I think you get what I mean). That's something to work on. On top of being impatient, I am also cheap and I won't pay for this. Something else to reevaluate.
Overall, good concept but it still needs some ironing.
</brutal honesty>