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Ask HN: How to make Numbrosia 2 and 3 descriptions more comprehensible?
2 points by amichail on July 8, 2009 | hide | past | favorite | 1 comment
See descriptions here:

http://www.numbrosia.com (Numbrosia and Numbrosia 2)

http://amichail.posterous.com/numbrosia-3-screenshot-and-description

The Numbrosia 2 and 3 descriptions are probably incomprehensible to most people.

I realize that videos would help considerably and I plan to make them, but I would also like to have text descriptions that are more comprehensible.




Cool looking game - am DL'ing now. The first thing to me is that you should NOT have both on the same page - that is confusing as hell to me. Each version should have a separate page/section.

Okay - DL'ed and am playing. Tutorial is very well done - that is, until I got to the first Math move explanation. "Try adding 1 to row 2 by tapping it twice with the second tap to the RIGHT of the first one"

Whoa!

I did it but I don't know what happened. A highlight of, "Here's what happened after you did that" would have helped. I have no clue what I did because the popup screen completely covers up that section.

I was able to "get it" after going through the tutorial though (and solve my first one). I dig it - very cool idea.

So... to your question:

The terms "rotation moves" and "math moves" are confusing. I get "math moves" better than the other but it still isn't great. I don't think, actually, that you need to name the moves. In your explanation, you simple explain that you can move entire columns and rows and you can add or subtract 1 to entire columns and rows. "To move columns and rows, simply swipe the column or row in the direction you want it to go."

Thats the simple part - the hard part is explaining addition/subtraction. I think it needs more text than you currently have yet without the term "math move"




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