The original statement was pretty clear and short. This new one takes a lot of words and it's not at all clear to me what they are aiming for. What, exactly, does "empower" look like when it's implemented? Exactly which are the activities that people value the most? (Actually, has anyone thought about whether those activities even require a computer?)
This isn't ambitious, it's meaningless. Not a good sign for corporate excellence.
This isn't ambitious, it's meaningless. Not a good sign for corporate excellence.