Show HN: Pitching YC on Saturday - What do you think of our about page?

[aelaguiz]

http://about.reviewlark.com/

[IanDrake]

Overall I like it. Some possible changes:

Above the fold page looks a little bland...everything looks like a background image, the birds and the text. My eyes weren't sure where to go.

Also Amir's bio:

"Engineer turned product guy. I find people smarter than me and help them kick ass."

Starts out as first person, then the second paragraph continues in third person. Personally I'd just nix the the part quoted above. It sounds cliche anyway.

[aelaguiz → IanDrake]

Aw I thought it was edgy! Yeah you're right though, the perspective change is bad. I'll change that.

Thanks for the feedback.

[aelaguiz → IanDrake]

I fixed that ;)

[rallen_austin]

Like the colors, simplicity and the tagline. So excited for you guys! ~ Rhonda