I think you may want to tweak your copy a bit. So many uses of the words "ad" an...

Jeremy1026 on March 6, 2013 | parent | context | favorite | on: Show HN: In-store ads - ads for your store, on you...

I think you may want to tweak your copy a bit. So many uses of the words "ad" and "store" that I didn't know what you were talking about by the end of your spiel.

hsuresh on March 6, 2013 [–]

Thank you. I will. Let me try to rephrase the text a bit.