Twice this refers to "this paper". What paper? If it's referring to itself, then it seems content-free. If it's another paper, where is it?
This seems a complete waste of time, reiterating material that's pretty obvious to a moment's thought. If I've missed something then I'd be pleased to have it pointed out so I don't feel like I've just wasted five minutes trying to find some value in this.
This seems a complete waste of time, reiterating material that's pretty obvious to a moment's thought. If I've missed something then I'd be pleased to have it pointed out so I don't feel like I've just wasted five minutes trying to find some value in this.