Hi, Graphite creator and website author here. I 100% agree with you since I am very bothered by marketing copy that's painfully obviously written by a nontechnical marketing team, and I want to avoid that here.
But... I guess it's hard being on the other end when actually writing copy so I've failed to design text which can be highly terse and also descriptive of complex concepts without turning into paragraph-long explainers. I know what Graphite is in my head, but conveying that to newcomers is really challenging! But clearly I need to try again.
Is there any chance you'd be willing to reach out to me, ideally on Discord but email also works, and let me use you to test my copy to a fresh pair of eyes? Basically as a B.S. detector :) I'm currently working on a new revamp to the website with many new pages, so having a fresh perspective and some ideas how to make things more direct (but not necessarily overly technical, since it should be digestible to artists also) and less marketing-ey, I'd find that highly valuable.
But... I guess it's hard being on the other end when actually writing copy so I've failed to design text which can be highly terse and also descriptive of complex concepts without turning into paragraph-long explainers. I know what Graphite is in my head, but conveying that to newcomers is really challenging! But clearly I need to try again.
Is there any chance you'd be willing to reach out to me, ideally on Discord but email also works, and let me use you to test my copy to a fresh pair of eyes? Basically as a B.S. detector :) I'm currently working on a new revamp to the website with many new pages, so having a fresh perspective and some ideas how to make things more direct (but not necessarily overly technical, since it should be digestible to artists also) and less marketing-ey, I'd find that highly valuable.