The video works for me but I think you should make your site look more like https://raindrop.io/.
It has the video on the top like you, but it also has pictures as you scroll down, basically a presentation for people too impatient to watch a video. Look into copywriting techniques for what to write as headers for the pictures, persuasion is important to attract users.
It makes it look more complete too!
Good luck on your site!
It has the video on the top like you, but it also has pictures as you scroll down, basically a presentation for people too impatient to watch a video. Look into copywriting techniques for what to write as headers for the pictures, persuasion is important to attract users.
It makes it look more complete too! Good luck on your site!