I would advise you to seek advice from a native English speaking copywriter for your main website. Here are some examples of phrases that stuck out and distracted me from your value prop as I scrolled through it:
- Data-driven pricing for your e-commerce business [with our platform]
(last bit is implied, you don't need it in that sentence)
- If you want a ready to go pricing solution as [an] Amazon private label seller this is for you
(Missing "an", but could so read better as just "ready to go pricing solution for Amazon private label sellers")
- If you want to build your own logic[s] this is the software solution for you
(Logic is the plural of logic, however you could also transform this statement to be much more interesting by talking about how easy and extensible your logic engine is, rather than focusing the sentence on the act of "building your own", which can be intimidating for some.
Just a few ideas from a quick scan. Good luck building your product!
- Data-driven pricing for your e-commerce business [with our platform]
(last bit is implied, you don't need it in that sentence)
- If you want a ready to go pricing solution as [an] Amazon private label seller this is for you
(Missing "an", but could so read better as just "ready to go pricing solution for Amazon private label sellers")
- If you want to build your own logic[s] this is the software solution for you
(Logic is the plural of logic, however you could also transform this statement to be much more interesting by talking about how easy and extensible your logic engine is, rather than focusing the sentence on the act of "building your own", which can be intimidating for some.
Just a few ideas from a quick scan. Good luck building your product!