I am rewriting the copy of our startup's front page and going by the now de facto advice of marketing the benefit not features, I found myself reading the following on our homepage >
1. Makes you happier! (new commenting features)
2. Saves you time! (fast, easy, cross-posting)
3. Show more meaning! (annotate photos, read+show EXIF, big pictures).
My gut keeps sounding its alarm over me touting benefits vs features. Do visitors really convert better if the headlines are benefits vs features?
NOTE: i know i can A/B test this but i am curious to what HN folks think...
Make it more specific, without jumping into a list of features. An excellent example: http://basecamphq.com.