On: Ask HN: Do you create music? let's hear it

[bitboop]

I mostly make acoustic music, but I've been dabbling with electronic music. My first electronic track with vocals: https://youtu.be/zjo0ElTSsuQ

[cryptica → bitboop]

The vocals don't match the electronic music as much as it should IMO. It sounds a but too much like children music. The vocals trivialize the subject matter. Electronic should be more neurotic.

I like the tune but think it could be a lot better with different vocals (or no vocals) and possibly some additional electronic soundtrack on top.

[bitboop → cryptica]

I appreciate the feedback, thanks for listening :)