That looks like a run-on sentence as well. After "streets" should either be a pe...

ksaj on Nov 21, 2019 | parent | context | favorite | on: The Bulwer Lytton Fiction Contest: 2019 Winners

That looks like a run-on sentence as well. After "streets" should either be a period, or at least a semi-colon. Maybe its missing a couple of colons in the second half as well. Well done!