I always believed the goal of a portfolio should be to show first, tell later.
IMO you have too much text. I think if you just showed me real examples of your work, it would be more powerful. We are lucky as designers/devs that we can communicate so much just through screenshots of our work. I'd do that! That gives you a shot at explaining everything else about yourself once your screenshots have impressed someone.
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You should list yourself on Tekbob.com :)
IMO you have too much text. I think if you just showed me real examples of your work, it would be more powerful. We are lucky as designers/devs that we can communicate so much just through screenshots of our work. I'd do that! That gives you a shot at explaining everything else about yourself once your screenshots have impressed someone.
<shameless (hopefully helpful) self-promo> You should list yourself on Tekbob.com :)