On: Ask YC: Give Us Your Best Elevator Pitch

[gm]

For some reason the word "collaborate" stopped me cold... it made the whole thing sound like some dilbert.com - generated mission statement.

If I re-read your statement and use "work together" instead of collaborate then it sounded much better to me. For some reason... strange.

[justindz → gm]

I'm in Marketing, and I think it crept in. Sorry about that. One of the things that I think holds "internet" poets back is that they don't get together in groups and critique each other. Work together is a better condensation of that, so I'll take it :-)