Seriously though, it's nice to hear you've improved here. Indeed, I think the big takeaway here is that previously you were writing for print (where long, meandering articles are the norm and formal language is almost expected) and now you're writing for the web (where people want short, easier to understand pieces they can read in whatever free time they have available).
> There were plenty grammatical mistakes.
Seriously though, it's nice to hear you've improved here. Indeed, I think the big takeaway here is that previously you were writing for print (where long, meandering articles are the norm and formal language is almost expected) and now you're writing for the web (where people want short, easier to understand pieces they can read in whatever free time they have available).
Good luck with your future blog posts!