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Mtinie
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My Family’s Slave
s/"Rather than"/"In addition to"
I agree with @edward_rolf's criticism of my original phrasing, the first sentence can be improved.
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I agree with @edward_rolf's criticism of my original phrasing, the first sentence can be improved.