I would expect no less even in an introductory text. Mathematics is meant to be precise and formal mathematics even more so. Prosaic pedagogy might suit a liberal arts introduction but it won't help the reader to convince themselves that the statements and theorems proposed are true and valid.
The syntactic approach is really useful as a programmer. A Logical Approach to Discrete Math[0] teaches programmers how to develop proofs in this style using logic and syntactic substitution. Once shown how easy it is to achieve rigour it is hoped that work-a-day programmers can formulate their own proofs and develop stronger specifications using mathematical tools.
I'm not a formally trained mathematician and am completely self-taught as a programmer but with some background in set and graph theory I found it approachable. It's certainly a good companion text to learning more practical systems like TLA+ or Lean.
Great that it works for you, but it won't convince anyone of anything if they don't understand what it means or why they should care.
As a writer or a teacher, if you want to reach a broad audience, give some simple, concrete examples, then explain the abstraction that covers them all. Assuming mathematical maturity won't help you reach your audience.
The syntactic approach is really useful as a programmer. A Logical Approach to Discrete Math[0] teaches programmers how to develop proofs in this style using logic and syntactic substitution. Once shown how easy it is to achieve rigour it is hoped that work-a-day programmers can formulate their own proofs and develop stronger specifications using mathematical tools.
I'm not a formally trained mathematician and am completely self-taught as a programmer but with some background in set and graph theory I found it approachable. It's certainly a good companion text to learning more practical systems like TLA+ or Lean.
[0] https://www.amazon.ca/Logical-Approach-Discrete-Math/dp/0387...