I felt bad for my observation of your title, so felt I should leave some feedback as well, I apologize.
Your primary message: "PowerGrabber is an invitation manager.
It captures the addresses from your inbound and outbound emails, so you can invite the people you email
to join your LinkedIn™ network."
I don't know what an invitation manager is, captures sounds non-friendly. How about: PowerGrabber ensures the people you email are connected to you via LinkedIn. No more lost connections.
I'd also drop all the trademark symbols, whilst probably more legal it looks very corporate and almost scammy as it breaks the line flow.
I'd put the benefits above the "What is PowerGrabber" (you duplicate your appropriate primary marketing message, only with more detail)
In reality your benefits are that the people you email are your linkedin contacts. I'd spell this out by a short scenario about losing a contact that would be really valuable in the future. The benefits you list are complex and scary and marketing speak. "Systematically".
From the application point of view - the most useful data is who do I email the most that I'm not connected to? do you offer that? A video would help. The "how it works" image isn't clear as to how it works. Your best bet is to make a few screens in PowerPoint and record them as a video.
Your privacy policy is a pdf, i'd put that as html.
I'd also consider changing the logo as when I see that logo I think of the soviet union which is uhm, probably not appropriate :)
It's a neat idea and I'd use it if it worked with GMail and Mac. It solves a problem and is of clear value to the user, I'd make sure your marketing messages were similarly clear.
Just to back this point up with my upvote, I don't like the 'invitation manager' terminology. I basically read that first paragraph, didn't get why it was useful to me, then closed the page, no offense!
The first sentence already describes what PowerGRabber is. Below that, SHOW me why it's useful, whether it be a flowchart, a screenshot, or whatever :)
also I just scrolled down to your diagram at the bottom and still didn't get it :X
Feel the same way about the trademark symbols for linkedin - really breaks up the flow for me. While getting rid of (or reducing) the trademark symbols would help, I would also suggest trying to mention Linkedin less. For example, under benefits, your mention of Linkedin in the first line is sufficient - it doesn't need to be repeated in the bullet points.
I'm sure you can just put LinkedIn is a trade mark of LinkedIn Corp or something at the footer. IANAL. I am a designer and can tell you the TM looks ugly :)
Your primary message: "PowerGrabber is an invitation manager. It captures the addresses from your inbound and outbound emails, so you can invite the people you email to join your LinkedIn™ network."
I don't know what an invitation manager is, captures sounds non-friendly. How about: PowerGrabber ensures the people you email are connected to you via LinkedIn. No more lost connections.
I'd also drop all the trademark symbols, whilst probably more legal it looks very corporate and almost scammy as it breaks the line flow.
I'd put the benefits above the "What is PowerGrabber" (you duplicate your appropriate primary marketing message, only with more detail)
In reality your benefits are that the people you email are your linkedin contacts. I'd spell this out by a short scenario about losing a contact that would be really valuable in the future. The benefits you list are complex and scary and marketing speak. "Systematically".
From the application point of view - the most useful data is who do I email the most that I'm not connected to? do you offer that? A video would help. The "how it works" image isn't clear as to how it works. Your best bet is to make a few screens in PowerPoint and record them as a video.
Your privacy policy is a pdf, i'd put that as html.
I'd also consider changing the logo as when I see that logo I think of the soviet union which is uhm, probably not appropriate :)
It's a neat idea and I'd use it if it worked with GMail and Mac. It solves a problem and is of clear value to the user, I'd make sure your marketing messages were similarly clear.
Just my $0.02