On: Into Thin Air: How I Spent $5,000 on Air and Made Fifty-Year Old Women Swoon

[nirmal]

Writing down my thoughts in disjointed, syntax-less phrases is usually the first step to putting together an article, not the last.

[drm237 → nirmal]

Would you have read the whole thing if it was a long winded essay in paragraph form?

I've seem more and more blog posts where this twitter style is used and for certain situations, it's very effective.

[mwmanning → drm237]

"for certain situations, it's very effective"

It may be for some, but this isn't one of them. I made it about halfway through before I completely lost interest, because there was no indication of the point of the article or where it was going.

This article is a study in tedium.

[jdueck → drm237]

"I didn't have time to write you a short letter, so I wrote you a long one."

- Mark Twain

[nirmal → drm237]

If it was well written it wouldn't be long winded.