I'm struggling not to find the writing style boastful or arrogant. I can't put my finger on why I get that vibe, but I do, and it's off-putting. Thoughts?
It's possible and I'm sorry if it does come off that way. When I write, it is a tough balance between being showing humility and taking the tone of "here's what I've learned and I might be wrong" vs. "HERE IS WHAT I'VE LEARNED"