Ask HN: Comment and Recommendation on my site

[stevoo]

I am trying to push out my startup.

I just release a first iteration of the code yesterday and i am wondering if you have any ideas/comments/etc in order to make the site behave and look better ?

Unfortunately i dont have all the time in world so development is slow.

Thanx.

www.cygamerentals.com

[DanielStraight]

1. Is there anywhere on the site you say where you're based? It's a big world. If you're based in China, I find it unlikely you'll be serving customers in Brazil.

2. The plans on the "Register" page make no sense. See:

"Value 2 Two game rentals per month You will be allowed to rent two games each month time. You can not hold more than one games at a time"

Huh?

3. You need to hire a native English speaker to fix the text on the site.

[RiderOfGiraffes]

Clickety click: http://www.cygamerentals.com