The medium is the message I suppose.
I wonder if this style, applied to this issue, is powerful only for technical people, or it it would be equally compelling to other groups.
I doubt other groups would find this so compelling, because a lot of intelligent, engaged, perceptive people have been writing about this for a long time and I've never seen something like this from a non-technical writer.
On the other hand, this article is much more useful: a compelling description of the problem and examination of what isn't working, followed by a clear call-to-action on what they suggest be done (in this case, adopting a minimal anti-harassment policy).
More like this, please.