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Some feedback that I hope is constructive: Once you have your lyrics, refactor them! For example

"They'll talk about me like one of the greats / I'll be chilling with Bezos and Bill Gates"

could be improved (IMO) to:

"They'll buzz about me like one of the greats / I'll be chilling with Jeff B. and B. Gates"

Introduces wordplay (bees buzz) and internal rhyme ("me" rhymes with "[Jeff] B.") You can usually make these kinds of edits without too much restructuring.

Then, you might replace "chilling" with "drinking" to get a triple entendre since drinking causes a buzz.

Or maybe better, you say "sipping java with Jeff B. and B. Gates" because coffee also gives you a buzz, and you get some wordplay out of "java" (although maybe you don't want to!)




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