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Looks great. Setting a line-height of 2.7rem gave the paragraphs some more room to breathe, those thick underlines made it claustrophobic in there. They're also not really adding anything to the presentation other than to break up the monotony of bare text, with the colored onHover gives the appearance of a link but then you get disappointed when they don't function that way. I'd pick some other way to highlight the words than underlining.

The email address at the bottom has too slight a color difference from the 'contact me at' part. Either make it contrast more or just make them the same color. The email address also gives the appearance but not behavior of a link.

Decreasing font-size on the non-bolded text on Recent Work to 1.1rem gives a better contrast with the headings.

Lowering the line height for the description text of the TwinThread blurb to 2.2rem makes the structure of the information more cohesive.




Fantastic typography feedback, thanks.




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